Hey, congratulations, for your first time, it is very good, the graphics look very good, your next movie, probably will be loved.
Obviously, it should be more durable, and if you want that it be funny, well, you know what to do...
A little simple, if you really want to get better, I consider it is not necessary to battle doing better graphics, but you should do it more funny.
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